Time: about 6 minutes
Topic: Must be approved by Sandra BEFORE speaking in class!
Visual Aid: 1 required per Textbook standards, with citation
References: Two sources, 2 oral citations minimum
Grading: points evenly distributed over organization, content & delivery.
Points: ________
Order: Sign up today! Grades docked for missing class on sign-up day.
Outline: See below, same as midterm PLUS References/oral citations. One copy due to me BEFORE you make the speech. Optional: Early copies emailed to idnasss@yahoo.com for extra input/editing/tips.
Overview: As an audience we will be listening for a new perspective on an old idea OR new information.
Speakers goals: Teaching us something by focusing us adequately, avoiding ‘persuasion,’(should should not be in your thesis/purpose), attempting audience interaction at least once, as well as being appropriate as you explain, instruct demonstrate or describe and ultimately offer the potential of life enrichment to us.
Bottom line: What often makes the difference between a C speech and an A or B? Contagious enthusiasm! Convey how much you care about your topic! (Brydon and Scott 368).
Outline: INTRO--attn getter, thesis/purpose, preview mp's, connection, credibility, transition to deeper exploration of mp's in body--BODY--main points 1-3 repeated and explored in depth supported by examples,research,analogies orpersonal experiences and visual aids, transition to conclusion--CONCLUSION--conclusive language, restate thesis, review briefly the main points (tell 'em what u just told 'em!) and end with a BANG!--Alphabetical References list Per APA or MLA (Not spoken, just included for me with the outline)
Also provide feedback for the speaker who goes immediately after you do! (10% of grade!)
For this BLOG, due next TH 10/22, please let your classmates know what you hope to gain through peer feedback, ie: what would be most helpful to hear from classmates about your speech? Sounds easy, right? Ok, if you want credit, turn it into a RAPor a Rhyme or a Poem! Can be funny or serious, whatever you like! About 5 or 6 sentences ONLY! Email me with any questions on the info speech! idnasss@yahoo.com.
MY RAP
YO YO YO, SANDRAH IN DAH HOWWWSE
WHEN I GET FEEDBACK I LIKE TO HEAR
SOMETHING GOOD I DON'T WANNA FEEL FEAR
ABOUT MY GRADE CUZ I DON'T WANT IT 2 SUCK
ONCE I MADE A SPEECH ABOUT A LITTLE LOST DUCK
DON'T B 2 HARSH, BREAK IT 2 ME GENTLY
IF I SAID UM 2 MUCH WHILE I WAS ROLLIN' IN MY BENTLEY.......WUUURDDDD
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This is T Dizzle
and I come to share the fizzle
all my peeps
please don't bleep
and make me cry
cause I just want to fly
learnin to speak
makes me creak creakedy creak
please be gentle
or ill go mental!
Tiffani Scott
CJ Mendez is my name.
Freestylin's definitely not my game.
In my speech I like to teach, but I know my mumbling is lame.
When you give me some feedback go ahead and tell me what I lack.
Or what is good or what is bad, cause any help will make me glad.
It can be harsh, it can be polite, cause any help from you guys is tight.
Ill be very grateful for it all...thats enough for my blog on this wall.
Lol.
CJ Mendez
Give me some feedback and i wont take it offensive
demonstrating ways on how i can be better is my obsession.
we get together have a session
it dont matter if you black or mexican
all onions are all welcomed.
so give me a penny for my thoughts. a dime for my brain, breaking this nervousness might sound strange.
but ill keep it as a mental note, visualizing on my next speech from that feedback quote.
OUT...
C. Jizzy Domondon hah.
these are GOOD! from the 301 'hood'!
Hey yo yo yo
Ok Informative instead of Persuasive is a fight.
No worries, so don't be polite
if my speech ain't tight.
Don't hesitate to say my organizational structure or delivery wasn't right. Or if my outline is what caused the plight. Critique my gestures, eye contact and connection because normally I am hype. Hopefully the passion will show like DaDa being "Top Flight" Basically tell it like it is on Thursday night. AIIIGHT?
This here, DJ Kaykay, leavin this request
if you wanna rip mah speakin open, be my guest
I'm tryin' my best to give it all i got
But a little feedback is all I want
A new take on somethin
I thought was right
An old take on somethin that i'd forgotten ain't tight
Harsh words, or kind words - one is preferred-
but if your crits are constructive an' specific, then neither's absurd.
Cheeeckkk it out
Yo my name be nat
And my speech about to be that better than a kit- kat
If yall done like it
dont be afraid , dont be scared, just sit.
It will be help me, it will be just like the skeleton key.
chikkaa chikkaa powwowww
hi im kaval...yay!
Caress.Me is the name
Speech is my game
I love all the feedback, from my possy's
& yah, I know I can be a bit bossy
But don't chu think this RHYME is saucy?? haha
So let me hear yo positive thoughts
Don't be skurred, go ahead & take a shot!!
I won't be mad, kuz I know my game is rusty
But by the end of the TERM, my SPEECHES will be lookin REEEEAL LUSTY!!!
heyyy now!! lol
Hey what's up? My name's Kayla C.
I'm gonna tell you, a lil 'bout me.
I love to speak, it isn't really hard.
I want my cretiques, like a cue card.
Give it to me simple, give to me fun.
Whatever you do, just make it well done.
I wanna know, how I portray what I do.
If you do it to me, I'll do it to you
To wrap it all up, Gimme some hints.
I'm hella unique, just like my fingerprints.
Lol. I thought this was really fun-I didn't wanna stop. Lol.
Btw, Everyone's raps are really good and very entertaining
This your homie Rae-mix in the house
Come to tell it like it is
All i want is your support
But you can tell me what i missed
Ill appreciate your words
Cuz your feedback's what i need
Jus be sure to keep it real
When you break it down to me
Let me know if you're feelin me
Projection, eye contact and all
Am i organized to the beat?
Or like the car that up and stalled
I know with you in my corner
I can grow, i can learn
From wack-town to mac-town
Speeches so hot ill make it burn
Rachel Smith
hahaha this was fun
ay ay whats goood its anum
& when it comes to opinions i know you most definitely have em
so when i make a speech don't hesitate to let me know
if i did a good job or i looked kinda crazy yo
tell me about what i lack
and if i made enough eye contact
let me know if i do well
and if i dont you can still tell.
epic fail.
My name is Camille
Let me tell you how i feel
If you going to give me feedback
please make sure its on track
If you tell me that i sounded smart
Tell me from your heart
If you tell me that I did bad
Please tell me if nice so im not sad
Either way I appreciate the feedback
And i will try and stay on track!
eww.. this is Camille Scott. hopefully this was okay :-)
Ladies and gents, what is your intent....hold on... Let me go ahead and vent...
Im lookin for some info, so can you please be gentle...I need some of your feedback, so please try not to hold back...just go ahead lean back while i try to relax.
Standing up in front of everyone makes it so hard to sort out my thoughts, so please try not to be harsh...Let me know what i can do to better my speeches. i can assure you i will be grateful, but as long as no one is hateful.
Tara Scalese
I cant rap, I cant sing
Nor can I give speeches, in public speaking
I dont want any feedback 'cause my confidence may crack
They tell me I did good, and make me misunderstood
Between politeness and the truth
I really want the truth, no matter how it hurt
My accent my delivery skill,
I know I suck at those
Now that I am stuck, I would like to stop before I go nuts
Nhi Hoa
Hey hello this is Z
and im here to tell thee
the goods the bads
and how the speech is done dont hesitate truth always hurts son
so if I stutter dont hold back
just tell me what I lack
just keep the words coming
and make sure there true
cuz sayingg those umms
is gonna fail you
Sandra can't you see
I need these extra credit Bee
although im aiming for an A
so hayy gurl hayyy
=]
Yo yo yo MC EC in da hooouse! Im may not rap I may not rhyme but when it comes to feedback I need time.
If my speech stinks don't be afraid to let me know I try to do the best you know. If my delivery lacks don't be afraid to say in the feedback. Wurd to the homies.
Eric
The name is Katie
and I am a lady
feedback is a thrill
so i can make a mill
....
okayokay Im clearly not a rapper, and sitting here for 10 minutes thinking isnt getting me anywhere. haha. I really like how our feed back has opportunities so we know what to do different, and thats my favorite part.
KatieJean
Hey you all...
Feedback makes a person realize their mistake
If I am making mistakes please let me know like a piece of cake
Don't be shy will not take it offensively
Although it might be lovely
Will try my best to improve but not a gurantee
Since I heard it's crazee
Sonal.
Hay you out there… Lilia in the house.
Coming to you strait from Sac town,
Love what I hear so lets get clear.
I will not mind if you all could find
a bit to share on your despair
when you up there. You know what I mean
So lets be fair and get it all there.
I’ll start…the pain, the stress I’ll just confess.
- Lilia
Disclamer: not a professional rapper. lol!
ay, its your girl monique better known as DJ Nique/
I come to ya'll for advice better/
yet some critique/
It's hard out here with so many ways to speak/
all i wanna do is get a perfect grade for my speech/
so lend your girl some new techniques/
if i do what i gotta do/
someday i'll be the TEACH!!!!
yeaaaaaa boiiiiii.
im out...then .. peace~!
Yo Yo Sandruh,
U kno I'm back/
becuz I ned some more credit/
your blogs are always fun/
I have no need to run/
your class is awesome/
and just like a flower I'm ready to blossom/
It's bcuz of your class/
that I gain all the skills I need/
to be more pubically open/
and that's what I was hopin/
to get outta this semester/
whoa, now I've done to much work/
can u please give a pregnant women a rester?!
LOL!!!!!!!!!
:P
Yo, wassup, my name is Sarah B,
When I give a speech I totally
Wanna do my best but you know how it is
speaking in public really ain't my biz
so break it to me gently, don't break my heart
i know my nervous speeches ain't works of art
so all i really want when you give me feedback
is give me honesty, don't just talk smack
Be real, yo. :)
ahhh hahahahahaha... so i just realized... i want some xtra credit...
but i also want a rest/break! is that possible?
hahahaha... i crack myself up....
(cut it out)
bwahahhahahahahaha
-nique
This is C-Dubb and I am here to say, Comm 301 has came along way. From Introductions, blogging, group speeches to the most informative ones, with a teacher that is credible for making her class fun. Getting feedback on my speech is the task, be honest and don't hold back is all I can ask. Reality is we should all want to improve, what other true motive is there for being in school. So Sarah for real I am getting a lot out of this class and rater don't be afraid to ream my (a ) watch yo mouth. uhhh huuuh huuuh ha
HOLD UP, I FEEL YOU HOMIES! SWEET RHYMES AND JUST IN TIME, BANG THE CHIME, GIRRRRRLLLLLLLLLLL.......
LOL WITH THE RAPPING GOIN ON UP IN HERE . . . . .WOW U PEPS R TALENTED!!!!!!!
saihra nagin
I absolutely do not know how to rap, but i admire the talent presented by the folks in class. Ive actually never even attempted to rap not even in the shower. But after reading the comments i have been aroused to attempt.
saihra nagin
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